Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country?
Of late tourism has increased rapidly. More and more nations across the world support tourism, while there are many positives to this, there are few negatives as well. However, I think, there are more advantages with visitors than disadvantages. In the below paragraphs we go in-depth of this and try to understand the pros and cons better.
Nowadays, every country is looking for alternate source of revenue, to cut the burden on existing means, to strengthen their economy. For instance, the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia recently has started providing visa for tourists, to aid tourism which is an alternate economy source to their existing source of fossil fuel. Countries like Indonesia, Malaysia and Singapore majorly depend on tourism for economy. When we have many globetrotter in the country, the industries that benefits in large are the hospitality, leisure, local small-scale industries like artisans, hand-loom etc, it creates jobs for the local community, the government funds for public infrastructure, overall it revives the economy of that place.
On the down side, with strangers exploring the native place, the chances of illegal migration of people becomes higher, smuggling of restricted goods to the country will be in raise, Often, people from outside damage the monuments of historic importance as they fail to understand the archaeological importance of the place or thing. To exemplify on the above points, on a regular basis we read in newspapers in Dubai, the number of illegal immigrants who were deported back to their home countries, many instances of people arrested at the airport for carrying restricted goods like plants and seeds are reported.
Although, tourism has some drawbacks as mentioned above, it can be minimized if handled with strong enforcement of laws and vigilant policing in the country. I think, with more foreigners coming into the country, the economy strengthens and the employment opportunity to the local community increases, which outweighs the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, then, well, while, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4335443038 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88415124307 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601265822785 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.2144908078 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.083333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197177397428 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795270270069 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655374049662 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114339468398 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713341663096 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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