Some parents believe that children should be given more time on their physical activities while other parents think that study must be priority of toddlers in their early ages.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is review that few fathers and mothers believed that kid must spend a lot of time on athletics whereas numerous believed that academic is the significant goal of preschoolers in their early life period.In this essay I would shed light on both notion and give my own point of view.
There are three main reasons why it is imperative to invest more hours on sports .Firstly,when younger children involve in fitness activities then their body muscles are stretched out so blood can easily flow.Such as,if youngsters do swimming their muscles get strong and grow up quickly.Secondly,exercise has a number of benefits.when kiddie do workout those pupil have lack of health problems.In particular,they have a strong heart,lower risk of several diseases.Finally,those youth who are associated with training can improve moods and self-esteem.For instance,structured sports,attending organised events or playground games.
However I would agree about the idea that school learning is the superior part of childhood life.One of the thing is that during early ages of kids parents should think about their schoolhouses to learn basic education of life.let's say,how to talk in a proper manner also how to behave with elders.Another point is that after school timing children must encourage by parents to further revise what they learned in an institute.e.g,hire tutors to elaborate them with more ideas about the same topic that kid does in school.
In conclusion after discussing the given idea I come to the point that off-course and games is essential for youngsters but despite of this,education in life should be superior in early period of life to grow up well educated so can easily get dream job to live life in a comfortable way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44278993081 2.80592935109 123% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 69.0 20.2975951904 340% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 150.195497602 49.4020404114 304% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 364.25 106.682146367 341% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 69.75 20.7667163134 336% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 35.75 7.06120827912 506% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202446844216 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109437560383 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390193844092 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109437560383 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390193844092 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.0 13.0946893788 290% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.44 50.2224549098 3% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.18 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.13 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.6 10.1190380762 293% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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