You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room.
Dear Maria,
Hope you're doing well. It was a delightful experience to meet you after a long run, and you and your family made my last couple of days a memorable event in Australia. I'm so grateful to you all for being so loyal to me.
By the way, I think I 've forget an important file of mine in the room where I stayed at your home since I haven't found it in my luggage despite searching several times . It is dark red coloured and most probably in the Cupboard of the room.It is crucial for me not only because of my certificates but also owing to documents of contract signed during Seminar.
Actually, I 've to submit the papers of deal to my boss within upcoming two days, so I want you to spare some time from your hectic schedule to post this file through express delivery as soon as possible.
Thank you in advance for assistance.
Yours affectionately,
Sania
- You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 78
- A company has asked your local council to open a factory in the area where you live. You and your neighbors feel that this is not a great idea. write a letter to the local council.In your letter, you should:state what problems this might causeexplain how 78
- In some countries private cars are now banned from certain City Centre what are the advantages of such a system and do you feel this is something that most cities should adopt 84
- People s shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to rather than other factors To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- Some parents and teachers believe that children s behaviour should be strictly controlled while others think that children should be allowed to grow up in their own way Discuss both views and give your own opinion 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Maria, Hope you apos;re doing well. It was a de...
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Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yal to me. By the way, I think I apos;ve forget an important file of mine...
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Line 9, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... luggage despite searching several times . It is dark red coloured and most probab...
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Line 9, column 253, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...st probably in the Cupboard of the room.It is crucial for me not only because of m...
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Line 13, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...igned during Seminar. Actually, I apos;ve to submit the papers of deal to ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, well, i think, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5317622327 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.70303030303 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.3648197644 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375935916306 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15017622515 0.0766984524023 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474909026989 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187036545031 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568119440939 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.