Many men and women are making the decision to have children later in life.
Why is this trend occurring?
What are the impacts of this development on both family and society?
The current generation is evolved only between money and work.These two factors play an important role to run a family.Both men and women are equally running behind to have a good status and money for their better future.This is one of the reason why they tend to delay birth of a child.
Firstly,Both the men and women at present are so scheduled and busy in their life that a child coming to life may change everything like for example,women has to be give up working for a short time till the baby is born and till the baby grows to a certain age though the present work places do provide maternity leaves it is for a short time but the mother might not feel to come and work again while the baby is at home.The other factor is might be new expenditures for a baby and there are few families who can't afford that based on their income so they plan it later once they are financially settled and can take all the responsibility for having children.
This trend is being followed with a high percentage currently.There is also another reason for example parents force to get married at a younger age.At that age they would have no idea how to raise a child so they tend to delay it for sometime once they get enough knowledge to bring up a child.
Secondly,This may have an impact on family as their parents would eagerly waiting to have grand children and take care of them.If they plan it for later family would never support and say that it has to happen at a right age if the age exceeds there would be no point if you have a child and by the time the child goes to school you would have no energy to take care of them.Women has a certain age to have a child-birth if that crosses it would be very difficult to have a child.The society would also raise doubts about even long time of marriage why is there a delay in child birth.In one respect it may be positive for society because if people are choosing to work for longer, a country will have a productive workforce.The fear of family would be if they have a child at elder age it would be difficult to support them and take care of both the family responsibilities and the child.
In the conclusion,There are several reasons in having children later in life, and this can have a number of impacts, both positive and negative. Given that society continues to change, this trend is likely to continue well into the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44217687075 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5299538314 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462585034014 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 285.790715968 49.4020404114 578% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 326.5 106.682146367 306% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 20.7667163134 354% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.8333333333 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.130454897889 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646743615787 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13513256283 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820581699721 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.2 13.0946893788 276% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.3 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.66 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.