The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph gives information about the number of people, who lived in Someland, suffered from X disease over a 35-year period from 1960 to 1995.
Overall, it is clear that the number of infeceted people rose dramatically, reached a peak in 1970, before dropping to zero in 1990.
In 1960, the number of cases of X disease stood at 100 cases, remainded stable for 5 years, rose by 400 cases, before standing at this point for 5 years .
A fortuanet event occured between 1980 and 1990, with the number of infected people dropping to zero in 1990. After this time, this report show that any case did not suffer from the disease in this area.
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Why could this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries 84
- The graph shows the number of cases of X disease in Someland between 1960 and 1995 58
- Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films Whycould this be Should governments give more financial support to local film industries 56
- incidence of X disease 61
- incidence of X disease in Someland 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e for 5 years, rose by 400 cases, before standing at this point for 5 years . ...
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Line 9, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...fore standing at this point for 5 years . A fortuanet event occured between ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 538.0 965.302439024 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 115.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67826086957 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.27472217062 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29873562931 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660869565217 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 151.2 283.868780488 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.5530485744 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.6 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 5.23603664747 8% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0599219945971 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296404955042 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306792346045 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.034178403931 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029631406185 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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