Nowadays in many countries woman have full time jobs. therefore, it is logical to share household task evenly between man and woman. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement.
Working women have become a wide-spread tendency in modern society. While some people still believe that housework is only women's duty, I absolutely agree with the claim that it would be reasonable to divide all housework. The reasons for that and examples will be discussed in this essay.
To begin with, full-time working women tend to be exhausted as much as men, thus it seems to be an extra pressure to execute housework even though this used to be considered as only female duties. So, cooking dinner or cleaning house responsibilities should be shared among family members. Further, supporting gender equality has become an extremely popular trend for developed countries. Governments have produced many laws for women protection and gender equality. For instance, with the creation of a friendly environment for this tendency, more and more fathers are allowed to receive a year off for caring for a newborn child. Finally, this trend appears to be a strong base of any relationship. If each partner is helpful and understanding, many difficulties linked to everyday routine may be avoided. For instance, many young couples experience some challenges due to this reason in the first year of marrage, so if they are not able to find a compromise and divide their chores, the divorce may be inevitable.
All in all, in the modern world, when humanity aims to gender equality and try to support this tendency, equal sharing of housework seems to be extremely reasonable and logical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, may, so, still, thus, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10204081633 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80593765625 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620408163265 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2956436314 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.166666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0694214529659 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274829665109 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022850709047 0.0667982634062 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442946101598 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192512384057 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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