In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
pollution in various shapes thrown in marine life are a major concern for people who seek protaction for the environment. Oil spils, wastes and toxic metarils from factories contribute in destroying animals life and have a harmful effect on human. in the following lines the possible causes will be explanied following by the dangerous effects.
First of all, many factories intent to get rid of there garbage inside rivers and oceans instead of recycling in such ways benefit the society. Although, governments in many countries impose restricted regulations to stop these actions, it seems not effictive enough. tons of toxic rubbish put into water everyday, that caused a lot of diying out anmials and fish. According to The Universty Canada West research 10 million tons of poisond waste are thrown every day in water. Morover, that kind of pollution does not affect animals only but also people who drink water contain matrials can end thier lifes'
Secondly, many people enjoy surfing and swimming inside the seas and oceans unfortanitly throw thier plastic bags and food leftovers into water. wide range of animals are diying because they are sufcating from these platic bags. many photos are shown in media of dolphins can not breath because the platic bags wraped around thier nick hider them form eat or brith. National geographic channel has made a decoumntary discussing this serious problem that caused the death of hunderd animals.
In conclusion, water pollution is very dengerous problem. However, there are other types of pollution should concern humanity like air pollution.
- Does the advantages of public transportation outweigh the disadvantages to what extend do you agree or disagree? 73
- Adults always say that life is better in childhood and classroom than now. Why they think so? Do you agree or disagree? 61
- some companies have uniform for their staff which must be worn at all what are the advantage for a company of having a uniform 73
- In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main type of rubbish. They cause water pollution and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree? 73
- Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Pollution
pollution in various shapes thrown in marine life...
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Suggestion: In
...ife and have a harmful effect on human. in the following lines the possible causes...
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Suggestion: Tons
...actions, it seems not effictive enough. tons of toxic rubbish put into water everyda...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...h. tons of toxic rubbish put into water everyday, that caused a lot of diying out anmial...
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Suggestion: Wide
...tic bags and food leftovers into water. wide range of animals are diying because the...
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Suggestion: Many
...y are sufcating from these platic bags. many photos are shown in media of dolphins c...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: BREATHE_BREATH[3]
Message: Did you mean 'can not breathe'?
Suggestion: can not breathe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, in conclusion, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25390625 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46382209413 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6796875 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2356576724 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.461538462 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892279204637 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258534709568 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359352550328 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513220415163 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101561482512 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.