The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the world of today, it is admitted that we are living in a highly sophisticated marketing environment. As a result, some people are of the opinion that it would be greatly beneficial for our society if all types of advertising are banned, as they are useless and have demerits only. Nevertheless, I find this idea disagreeable for several reasons.
The first reason worth mentioning is that running advertisements is an extremely effective way to boost sales or draw public attention towards a product, service or brand of a company. In fact, although doing advertisement on means of media like radio, TV or newspaper costs enterprises an arm and a leg, especially during the prime time and peak hour, it is still worth the investment and effort as their brands will have great opportunities to reach millions of prospective customers. It is obvious that if businesses are prohibited from doing marketing for themselves, their sales will absolutely witness a significant decline, considerably affecting their ability to pay taxes for the governments.
Secondly, it is wrong to say that advertising serves no useful purposes because thanks to it, people will get informed about an extensive diversity of choices. Indeed, not only do advertisements allow consumers to compare prices and quality of services and products, but it is also a perfect tool for people who spend most of their time at work or school to rely on, as they are lack of time to do window-shopping.
Last but not least, as the marketing industry employs millions of people around the world, a ban on advertising may push all of them out of work. It is true that unemployment will not only have detrimental effects on individuals but also the society as a whole, as it is one of the primary causes of social evils and crimes.
In conclusion, although different kinds of advertising may bring some people a sense of discomfort, it is still undeniable that they do more good than harm and should be allowed to maintain their presence in the society nowadays.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98538011696 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00610535453 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581871345029 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4958188251 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.0 106.682146367 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0909090909 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6363636364 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169223474166 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613823443139 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430349943065 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091705210197 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321354809302 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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