Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents are the best teachers.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Parents are essential for teaching their children the difference between right and wrong. Some agree with this view, whereas other disagree. In my opinion, I do believe that parent are the best teachers, teaching the young generation the way of living their life successfully.
Some individuals opine that parents are not able to teach their children the necessary skills and expertise requires in building a successful future. Moreover, they are not able to give the practical knowledge and experience to the young generation about the work life and company which is vital for them to construct a prosperous professional life, they can only have this erudition from universities and schools. To elucidate, colleges aid children in developing this listening, speaking and presentation skills required for a job which cannot be taught by parents.
However, parents are the first point of contact of children. Mothers and fathers are the role model of children. They teach their children moral and ethical values which help them to become a good citizen. Moreover, parent are the devoted teachers and will educate their kids with full enthusiasm, making them understand the importance of responsible nature thus, building their overall personality which will prepare them for future endeavours. To exemplify, a child learns to communicate with others, have a calm and peaceful nature, understand the importance of relation and value of money from their parents.
To conclude, I vehemently agree that parents are indispensable in making their children socially, physically, mentally, psychologically and ethically strong. They are the best teachers imparting expertise, values and morals in the young generations
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lues and morals in the young generations
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54752851711 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8801973922 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562737642586 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.0424531368 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.230769231 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76923076923 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0817071742245 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336627090499 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238105309722 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602933950556 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311339405484 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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