Alot of people spebd a major part of their adult like at work, so job satisfaction is very important for individual happinedd. What are the main factors that contribute to job satisfaction? What are the possible solutions for people who are unsatisfied with their jobs?
People have been debating the principles of job satisfaction.While some hold the view that absolutely young Persons spend a lot of time at work and happiness for them are very important, the other highly insist that it's not necessary. According to my opinion there are main factors that help them to arrive job satisfaction and on the other hand many activities help to find best solutions for people who don't like their work.
Firstly the high salary plays an important role in job categorises. actually the people who live in modern society would like to earn high rate of money to use luxury life facilities, ambiens and even save money for rest of their life. For example the most of persons with educational experiences whom have University degree and experts CV have a spectacular opportunities to find gorgeous job situations like free insurance , bonus scheme, Comprehensive Healthcare provision and even subsidized Canteen. As a result these items help all employers to feel tranquil and Cozy about the future financial supporting. That led to they decrease their concentration and morality for doing routine jobs. In addition coworkers are another main factors in job locations. actually when the person work with humours and polite persons, feel the better than impolite areas. some of the bosses dedicate to do many things to make friendly hours for young persons because long job hours leded to flourish stress and unflexibilities among them since 1990. although the workers did not extra activities and they were working in boring location every day, today there are many gyms and pools with high tech gadgets in offices and companies to decrease negative work effects. It's very worst when everything has improved through bosses young people expect government helped to find best job situation.
secondly thesedays there are many solutions to help everyone to reach job happiness. one of them is changing job. For instance if they were unhappy, ask new job from Job Association. The social areas which established from country jobs Institute. Just using single e-mail they could will find suitable job. moreover these changes had to government to find poor officers and ban them to arrange and sort all city work centers with standard satisfy roles. in Addition the person should to change own work offices with simple things like Bamboo plans, colorful desk and chairs, listening light music and having healthy and homemade meal instead of junk foods and drinks. when workers have been changing their negative job affects everything will happiest than the past
In conclusion the government bosses and workers have to help each other to rich High rate of brain, body and mental health when they are up to ears at hard and long job hours with organize expent satisfying ambience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2350.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13100436681 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56761184074 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 176.041082164 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578602620087 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.8142753567 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267471825711 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857897749789 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637988356047 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172223132508 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0914698809591 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.