Culture shock is a new worrying concern for few immigrants. What are the possible options to eradicate this issue?
Recently, culture shock has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "what steps can be taken to eradicate this issue?". Whereas it is a widely held view that government must be liable to solve this problem, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the society standpoint, cultural norms are bound up inextricably with social values, which indicates they lead to both valuable traits and incorrect factors. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between immigration and young generation as well as an exponential increase in antisocial behaviors. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of migration objects is correlated positively with not only educated migrants but also refugee.
Within the realm of psychology, without the slightest doubt, foreign country attribute to foreign culture, in that it would come down to cultural heritage, tradition, and religious belief. A salient example of such attribution is mass media, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take misleading for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint citizenship immigration problems. Likewise, hardly had they confined their attention to economic downturn, developed countries, and even unemployment. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of educational systems and public community.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that more consideration must be taken into account to tackle this issue. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, likewise, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1207.87684729 138% => OK
No of words: 286.0 242.827586207 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81118881119 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11531201598 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 139.433497537 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.713286713287 0.580463131201 123% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4048604561 50.4703680194 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147205996684 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390063098751 0.0925447433944 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573940740552 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815506406894 0.151781067708 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629464245485 0.0609392437508 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 11.5310837438 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.97 8.32886699507 132% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 55.0591133005 205% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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