some companies have uniform for their staff which must be worn at all what are the advantage for a company of having a uniform
Some companies set up a uniform during the daily work basis. Staff must follow this rule, Stick with the same dress code. Although some voices think that unit employees clothes has it drawbacks as what people chosee to wear is part of how they express themselves, more advantages can be explained for such approch.
In this essay the merits of that measure.
First of all, having a uniform in work places would be more offerdable. This because employees are not forced to buy different clothes for every work day to refine there appearance. For example,in my brother's company his co-workers might have one or two suit and that should be enough. If people must use their personal suits instead of work dress code a huge part of salary will spent on clothes not on essentials like food, rent and children education.
Secondly, it is much easier for customers to find people who in responsible espcially in crowded places like supermarkets.To illustrate, in places full of people who have inquiries about certain product it is hard to sort out whom in charge. If customers struggle for an assistance maybe they would lose their patient and leave without purchaseing, which could effect the profitability of a company. For example, many local big chains in Egypt do not force a uniform that make it harder to buy.
In conclusion, however, unit dress might not help in expressing our selves, it is also has its' advantages because it is less expensive and saves a lot of money, in addition it will comfort and easy to help customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
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Line 9, column 381, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...k dress code a huge part of salary will spent on clothes not on essentials like food,...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...lly in crowded places like supermarkets.To illustrate, in places full of people wh...
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Line 13, column 362, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... leave without purchaseing, which could effect the profitability of a company. For exa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88593155894 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60805461023 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0377492838 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329920494256 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102936602797 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710889874908 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135101591107 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107076428818 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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