The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries
The line graph illustrates about the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040. Overall, there are three countries namely japan, Sweden, United States and the rates are recorded by percentage.
Firstly, the percentage of proportion aged 65 and over in United States went steadily from about 9% to 10% in 1940 to 1960, and went up to 15% in 1980. From that point until 2020, the percentage went slowly to 14% and at 2040 the percentage reached 23%. Next for the proportion of population in Sweden, the percentage started at 7% in 1940, and grew around 9% in 1960. it can be seen that there was an unpredictable trend for the proportion of population in Sweden, starting from 9% in 1960 to 18% in 2020. Then, it went dow and will rise quickly in 2040 at 25%. For the proportion of population in japan, the percentage decreased at 5% to 3% in 1940 to 1960, and remained stagnant until 1980. The percentage climbed to 10% from 1980 to 2020 and will rise rapidly to 25% from 2020 to 2040.
In conclusion, japan will show the most proportion of population in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...7% in 1940, and grew around 9% in 1960. it can be seen that there was an unpredict...
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Line 9, column 66, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... show the most proportion of population in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59693877551 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60371594739 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474489795918 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1081168656 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310810586454 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141472306872 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140322966298 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.262603451578 0.15604864568 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135244980166 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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