The Internet is now used all around the world as a source of information and communication. However, it's often controversial, so many people think it needs to be controlled. Others believe there should be no interference whatsoever.
Discuss both points of view, and give your opinion
It is irrefutable that in this ultramodern era, the internet has been surging the popularity across the globe which is used in various departments in every country. Section of societies conceives that the law and enforcement should monitoring on the utilization of the internet while other averse that it should be free to access every people. This essay will discuss both views point and along with my inclination analyzed in the following paragraphs.
To commence, examining the reasons of controlled of the internet, the first and foremost one is, for reducing the terrorist attack because terrorists can communicate and receive the information via the internet, they can plan a new attack on any nation. As a ramification, thousands of people would become the victim of the attack and they lost their life. Moreover, overcome the cyber-attack on the banks and private information by using the internet can debit money without taking permission from the owner and bank. As a consequence, the number of frauds has been snowballing in the market and people lost their money as well as privacy.
Conversely, discussing the benefits of the no restriction on the internet, to begin with, people can use the internet not only for personal life but also for professional life due to which they can expand their business on the other nation and develop new employment. Therefore, it leads to the growth of the economy of the nation. Furthermore, individuals can understand the gravity of the situation regarding any issues even that either national or international by which they can update themselves and get various type of knowledge
In the final analysis, the reflection exhibited to above statement leads to firmly assert that the even though, internet play vital role in the society, the stringent rules and regulation should be made by the authority for security and safety of the citizens. If they will not act judiciously then we will pay for it in the years to come.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, while, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07668711656 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84490805219 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561349693252 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.422404602 49.4020404114 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.454545455 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6363636364 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145464695188 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513762543161 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403731408658 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0858713770558 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307608386964 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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