Do you agree or disagree with the following statment?
to improve the quality of education,universities should spend money on salaries of university professors.
it is nowadays an issue being discussed quite often about how to improve our quality of education. there are controversial questions maily proposed, such as paying more money to those professors, while others may think it is an efficent way to level up the quality of education, however, in my points of views, I personally are not fully support of this.
What comes to my mind is that it is undeniable that people are attracted by the salaries that the employee offered, however, there are still much more attraction that influence the quality of education.
To address my point of view , I would like to disscuss about how the education system works. it is for sure that the world changed rapidly, and that, our educational material hasn't change that fast. For example, the pollution issue nowadays is an serious problem that all the country worldwide are concerned. however, the material provided in the university stays the same material as 5 years ago. this may lower our quality of education, due to the fact that students can only find the new information on the website themselve instead of from the lecture of the professor.
Move on, the factor that truly affect the quality of education was the uneven distribution of resources. For example, in my country, there are policy that every university should have enough quantity of computers provide for students for several uses. however, due to the lack resourse of the private school, the money could not afford many as such computers for strudent. In this case, people from the poor family, may not have the access to use the computer to gathering information outside the campus. Thus, in order to level up the quality of education, I would rather think the money should put into technologies other than professor's salary.
Thirdly and finally but not least important is that due to the fact that the quality of professors certainly is the main factor that affect the teaching quality, the method of taking money to the professor may not be wise. For example, there are few professor that teaching the classes through watching movies. In my points of view, a knowlege to be taught is from the professor themselves, it is that if the prodessor not willing to dedicate their time on teaching, it would lower the quality of education.
From the abovementioned examples that i addressed, it is clear that i can not fully agree of the argument that university should spending money on salaries of professors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, so, still, third, thirdly, thus, while, for example, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2070.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95215311005 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64880773359 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492822966507 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0796597267 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.764705882 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94117647059 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212048843855 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652804333789 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743411201748 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129017047429 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890523859694 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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