Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world.
What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress, and how can we reduce it?
In recent years, because of the evolution industries 4.0, people day by day face off with a wide range of stress. There are various types of stress like acute stress, episodic acute stress and chronic stress which have bad impacts on citizens. In this essay, the causes behind this and the possible ways to tackle the problem will be discussed in detail.
First and foremost, one major worry is probably that the high requirement of social. People are busy and have no time for anything else. Furthermore, stress impacted the lives of many individuals from children to adults, rich to poor. For example, children are anxious about facing the world in future. Therefore, to do this effectively they are fighting for the top position in universities and colleges with their counterparts. Equally worrying is the suggestion that the work pressure. Due to the globalization and the free trade zone, business competition is getting tougher these days and it has increased the workload of many employees. As a consequence, many of these people are exhausted, frustrated and burn out with their daily life.
When dealing with first problem, it is the easiest way to work it out would be to change the expectations for young generations. For instance, Ministry of Education could be changing the teaching program and the pupils do not need to fight for the entrance to reputable universities. In terms of stress problems can be solved, and they can participate more in outside activities and wide their circle connection. Last but not least, taking into account the second cause, the only way to get the bottom of this dilemma would be to strictly be monitored and reviewed at employers' treatment to their labors by governments. Besides, governments must ensure that companies have been employing their labors at the proportionate working hours to reduce the stress level and to avoid any fatal work accidents
In conclusion, challenges and problems are the part of life. Everyone must face it someday. According to me, it should be handled bravely and by making few practical changes so to overcome stress caused by it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...dren are anxious about facing the world in future. Therefore, to do this effectively they...
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Line 3, column 431, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...s and colleges with their counterparts. Equally worrying is the suggestion that the wor...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...of life. Everyone must face it someday. According to me, it should be handled bravely and by ma...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04558404558 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73624736055 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598290598291 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9193261717 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3888888889 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208492306306 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574471623646 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552466219833 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128979300117 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552352470679 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.