Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat a balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this.
In this complex world, the advance technology has made human life more and more comfortable which is tend to they eat unhealthy food and lack of physical exercises. In this essay will explain the reasons and positive solutions to get rid of this common matter.
To begin with, there are different factors which can be considered as poor eating habits among the people. The main reason for people’s unhealthy lifestyle is the huge capacity of workload in their workplace. Many individuals work for extra hours in the office and they do not have enough time to have a balanced diet during their working hours can course this problem. In addition, people are suffering from stress and depression because of long hour shift can be another reason for developing negative eating habits. Growing of fast-food restaurants and attractive advertisements showing on television are motivating people to eat those unhealthy foods. For example, world large fast-food chain restaurants like Mc Donalds and KFC are establishing in every nook and corner in the world is the major matter which can be lead to people’s desire to eat them. As a result of the above reasons, people are left with no other option but consume fast food is the only option can impact obesity, heart diseases fatty liver and other health issues.
There are some solutions available to conflict the problem of poor eating habits among individuals. One positive solution is that self-confidence to have a better diet and regular exercise can always motivate people to have a sophisticated lifestyle. Apart from this, another effective solution is that the central government should encourage the society to have a balanced diet and invest more money in establishing health centres, sports clubs and social campaigns to illustrate the importance of daily exercising and balanced dietary plans.
To conclude, I believe that, improving the positive attitudes to eating a balanced diet and physical activities along with an individual's self-confidence can help in controlling the poor eating habits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, apart from, for example, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30303030303 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8241855242 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8241472486 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.615384615 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364936936162 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125727940536 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544768140169 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221065605785 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300079375805 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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