The map below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development
The first map illustrates the information about how centre of Islip town as it is now and second maprepresent how to planned construction of Islip town centre in the future. Overall, comparind two maps, it will be singnificantly changed in infrstructure, housing, transport and facilities in the future od Islip town.
Furthermore, The park is located south east of city centre which has a main road from west to east. Islip was very closed to countryside and shops, school and accomadation are situated at two sides of main road.
According to the future plan, It will be increased such as oval shape in a city centre where will be modified every facilities. So newly included bus station, shopling centre and car park is located north of the town. Significantly dual carriageway will be built around the town and it will be spread west to east. Indeed, The size of the park will be descreased rather than now and new accomadations will have constructed nearest the park. The few shops will be located one side of the predestrian path which is runaway city centre.
To sum up, The Islip town centre will develop in all facilities in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...According to the future plan, It will be increased such as oval shape in a city c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, second, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81818181818 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81659290496 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560606060606 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5651954464 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203755513991 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913081574669 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956277098914 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155950499725 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963780373387 0.0819641961636 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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