We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries
In recent years there is a major concern about social animals, that human beings has been changed in way of helping to someone even start step backing from their responsibilities. how they will able to help own people as well as others?
First of all, the main purpose behind aid to anyone in life will bring out huge impact for society. To give money to needy person is not only a way of providing help; there are some other sections those are must. For instance, due to the lack of the money poor one's are not capable to carve their talent; educated people have to distribute them books and teach them important subjects. This practice indirectly affect their nation growth because after getting education maybe they will be recruited by any companies and employment rate will increase and also country GDP simultaneously.
Locality aside, undoubtedly due to the global issues every nation is tackling with nature woes .just focusing on own problems can consider us a selfish among other communities. There is a suitable example of the G8, eight most developed countries discuss about every issue, means disbursed funds for poverty on globally also debate of other things: such as terrorism, illiteracy, unemployment. This think will prove the humanity not only for sore subjects on international level also in ordinary person's life, while living with others those who are belong to other religions or regions.
Hence, I am not expert and experienced in case of helping someone, but this world teach me a lot of things. There is a beautiful Quito "No one has ever become poor by giving". So it does not matter how rich or poor you are for helping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...anged in way of helping to someone even start step backing from their responsibilitie...
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Line 1, column 181, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
...ep backing from their responsibilities. how they will able to help own people as we...
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Line 5, column 520, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y will be recruited by any companies and employment rate will increase and also c...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se and also country GDP simultaneously. Locality aside, undoubtedly due to the g...
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Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...very nation is tackling with nature woes .just focusing on own problems can consid...
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Line 9, column 497, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...on international level also in ordinary persons life, while living with others those wh...
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Line 9, column 542, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ns life, while living with others those who are belong to other religions or regions. ...
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Line 9, column 550, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
... while living with others those who are belong to other religions or regions. ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04609929078 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60022914182 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68085106383 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5920158136 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141987977988 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514266101277 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423132690699 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886100300272 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385169850428 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.