differences between men and women mean many task are better suited to different sexes
With the thrid wave of feminism having a huge swell, the debate about inherent difference between the sexes is hotter than ever. Most feminist would argue that men and women are equally suited for all tasks. Those who oppose the movement claim that inherent differences give different advadtanges to the sexes in many task. Although there are some biologically driven physical differences between men and women they aren't vast enough to claim that biological sex dictates how inclined one is at many tasks, a few yes but by enlarge the sexes can be equally suited to most tasks.
Setting aside any discussion of gender and solely focusing on biological sex, even male and female is not as cut and dry as many like to claim. There are lots of instances of men with sex chromosomes other than XY and women with chromosomes other than XX. These chromosomal differences may lead to different hormonal or other biological profiles that alter the characteristics often assigned to one sex without seeing any change to gential (which is used to determine biological sex). Given this and the overall complexity that is genetic makeup and how that leds to phenotypes, there is a vast range of physically differences amoung one sex. So comparision between them is difficulut given the ranges overlap greatly. Additionaly, the environment and expectations placed on boys and girls is different. Changing the activities and beliefs they do or hold can change the physicallity the have as an adult. It is possible that if society alters it stance that the sexes have huge physical difference than the some of this gap shrinks even further. But for the rest of this argument I will set this aside and consider what is sterotypically considered the differences between men and women.
Obviously, some tasks, such as child birth and breast feeding are is solely in the domain of cis-women. All other task of child rearing are equally suited to either sex and any physical difference is entirely unimportant. Men tend to be larger than women with more muscle mass leading many to claim that men are better equiped to take on physical task of brute strength and women more inclined to task of finese. While this may have some truth, its bearing on life today post industrial revolution is minimal. Any advantage one sex has over the other is often overcome with the tools and technology we have today. Some may also argue that this is the reason sports is segergated by sex. While certian sports that rely heavly on force or heavely on finese may be better seperated. Many sports such as tennis using both may find if integrated the differences balance out. In dance task that used to be reserved for men such as lifting are changing quickly as more information about kinetics allows smaller people (women) to lift even the largest of men.
Despite some physical difference existing between men and women they arent so vast that they can't be overcome with knowledge and technology. These differences may have played a larger role in the past but as society advances
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun task seems to be countable; consider using: 'many tasks'.
Suggestion: many tasks
...e different advadtanges to the sexes in many task. Although there are some biologically ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
... differences between men and women they arent vast enough to claim that biological se...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun yes seems to be countable; consider using: 'few yeses', 'few yesses'.
Suggestion: few yeses; few yesses
...es how inclined one is at many tasks, a few yes but by enlarge the sexes can be equally...
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
... have huge physical difference than the some of this gap shrinks even further. But f...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
...nce existing between men and women they arent so vast that they cant be overcome with...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... and women they arent so vast that they cant be overcome with knowledge and technolo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...role in the past but as society advances
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2544.0 2235.4752809 114% => OK
No of words: 518.0 442.535393258 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9111969112 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59355228765 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 250.0 215.323595506 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482625482625 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 828.0 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6042551407 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.83333333333 5.21951772744 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452769362466 0.243740707755 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123048131652 0.0831039109588 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891282755189 0.0758088955206 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.303033383142 0.150359130593 202% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802933923453 0.0667264976115 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 100.480337079 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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