Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the statement that young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them in the past; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives for the following reasons.
To begin with, the usage of the Internet has spread to the world, making this generation an "information exploded era". In the past, young people have no such technology, so they must ask for elders' opinions. However, they can get almost all the information they need for making decisions by opening a website, typing keywords, and clicking the search button. For example, while I was choosing which university to enroll, I didn't let my parents decide it. Instead of asking them for the information which they may also have no idea as I did, I search the detail on the Internet by myself. I did it due to not only the Internet's convenience but also its accuracy.
Moreover, society has changed. Society used to be so traditional that there is limited space for young people to venture. In the past, parents often tell their children to make the decision which is the only way can reach success, such as choosing to be an engineer or a doctor as their career. However, society becomes more creative and more open-minded nowadays. There are abundant of jobs which are absent in the past, such as user experience designer. Young people are able to make decisions about their own lives because parents may not be familiar with those new options that youngers can choose.
With those reasons I have mentioned above, I wholeheartedly agree with the statement that young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives today while they depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... choosing which university to enroll, I didnt let my parents decide it. Instead of as...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, moreover, so, while, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85099337748 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54356584443 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493377483444 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 457.2 618.680645161 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4006657077 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78571428571 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.54478014111 0.236089414692 231% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17795772738 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.239492288148 0.0737576698707 325% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.467658788298 0.150856017488 310% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.262434966818 0.0645574589148 407% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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