Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
The prompt recommends that technology complicated our lives instead of simplifying; With the invention of some incredible technology living standard augmented than ever before, life also become more and more complicated with technological inventions. Though, technology fundamentally developed to simplifying our lives and simplified in many cases that over seen by the prompt. I am partially agree with the prompt because of the three reasons.
Admittedly, In the very beginning of the human culture life was simpler than now in many cases. people thought about survival and in many perspective surviving counted as the most important skill because of food shortage, lack of safe place and different basic elements of living. At that time goal of live was just surviving instead of thriving. With the inception of the technology people made survival easier not living, small hut replaced by edifice, animal husbandry and agricultural work replaced by corporate job, Ascetic life now full with debaucheries. In the end, result is that we live a life where basic elements of living available and easier to manage than before but with increasing competition for wealth and possession in social class, disparity in wealth making living harder for the most of the people.
Revolution in the technology gives us access to some amazing tools and device people think before. computer, electricity, four stroke engine few of them that later shape the social and cultural evolution of human society. computer makes easy many of daily task even with very simple instruction, we can solve problem without second thinking, and people are engaging in solving more and more complex problems. With the less tech savvy attitude towards technology increases dependency on the technology and detroiting our analytical thinking ability. Thus, with rapid urbanization living cost is increasing incessantly and people are abandoning bucolic life and move to the city because of better opportunity and income. Inequity in wealth and social status making living hard for the many people around the world, with increasing number of super reach people conversely creating a huge number of people super poor than ever before. Their lives become harder and harder because of technology. one important fact in this issue that increasing tendency of suicide is increasing in the every part of the world that is a very important indication of unhappiness with current living that make them despair and increasing problem of living make them take suicidal decision.
In additionally, technology brings us some most blessing gifts that make life easier in many cases one of them is invention of better treatment saved thousands of life in past century. safety from different natural catastrophes increased very effectively, thousands of life and property saved because of the invention some incredible technology like weather forecasting. food safety ensured because of technological development in the cultivation sector like better machine and seeds of developed species of rice and other seed like corn. Infant mortality rate is decreased very rapidly even in the developing country because of better treatment and more importantly proper education.
living standard increased as the result of technology and many more well beings also more available because of technology still in many perspective of living it just made complex. Dividation in society, increasing tendency to show off power ravaged world many times; world war and different war around the world between different ethnic people is also made life hard for the people around the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 394, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...over seen by the prompt. I am partially agree with the prompt because of the three re...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...ife was simpler than now in many cases. people thought about survival and in many pers...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun perspective seems to be countable; consider using: 'many perspectives'.
Suggestion: many perspectives
...s. people thought about survival and in many perspective surviving counted as the most important...
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Line 9, column 100, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computer
...g tools and device people think before. computer, electricity, four stroke engine few of...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Computer
...nd cultural evolution of human society. computer makes easy many of daily task even with...
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Line 9, column 399, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ngaging in solving more and more complex problems. With the less tech savvy attit...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...arder and harder because of technology. one important fact in this issue that incre...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Safety
...aved thousands of life in past century. safety from different natural catastrophes inc...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Food
...le technology like weather forecasting. food safety ensured because of technological...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Living
...more importantly proper education. living standard increased as the result of tec...
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Line 17, column 132, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun perspective seems to be countable; consider using: 'many perspectives'.
Suggestion: many perspectives
...vailable because of technology still in many perspective of living it just made complex. Dividat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, second, so, still, thus, well, in addition, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 92.0 58.6224719101 157% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3079.0 2235.4752809 138% => OK
No of words: 566.0 442.535393258 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43992932862 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.87757670434 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75723455551 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 215.323595506 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482332155477 0.4932671777 98% => OK
syllable_count: 992.7 704.065955056 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.59117977528 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.058652875 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.954545455 118.986275619 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 5.21951772744 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144959989164 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482625247857 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553479150627 0.0758088955206 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905227746243 0.150359130593 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590176464179 0.0667264976115 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 14.1392134831 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 48.8420337079 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 130.0 100.480337079 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.