As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious."
It is said that Knowledge is power, acquiring more and more knowledge then must increase the power. Instead, acquiring more knowledge makes things more complex and mysterious resulting more incomprehensible due to three reasons.
Knowing little about something arise questions in mind and wants to know about it more and more. For example, the scientist when learned about genetics and heredity, knowing about it more resulted in discovery of gene and then again about DNA, and then again about nucleotides. This process never ends and makes things more complex and difficult to comprehend.
In Stone Age, human being had no education, only knowledge they had was in feeding by hunting and gathering. Life seems to be simple and lucid. However, the more human being started learning, more mysterious their life has become. Nowadays, in 21st century, more technology developed, more intelligent people became and hence, more indecipherable, in fact like a maze their life has become.
A school days friend of mine has now became a doctor and he is very busy in treating patients with different diseases. He should remain abreast of the new scientific findings in medication and health issues. I find his life more complex than another friend of mine who is a farmer. The later has easy life, he simply grow food in his farm and feed his family. Hence, more the knowledge acquired more complex the life becomes.
However, gaining more knowledge also makes life easier in some cases. As an example if we gain knowledge of using computer then it makes various tasks easier, but also its complexities makes life even more difficult.
In sum, though some knowledge acquiring makes life easier, mostly acquiring more and more knowledge leads to more difficult to comprehend and mysterious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ower, acquiring more and more knowledge then must increase the power. Instead, acqui...
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Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...d no education, only knowledge they had was in feeding by hunting and gathering. Li...
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Line 7, column 38, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
... A school days friend of mine has now became a doctor and he is very busy in treatin...
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Line 7, column 318, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'grows'.
Suggestion: grows
...mer. The later has easy life, he simply grow food in his farm and feed his family. H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, for example, in fact, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 14.8657303371 121% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 58.6224719101 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15068493151 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61691346185 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.4932671777 113% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 704.065955056 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7609490526 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 23.4991977007 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 5.21951772744 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.476472138135 0.243740707755 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194207561517 0.0831039109588 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16023049529 0.0758088955206 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.293206505868 0.150359130593 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104646965763 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.