In order to help small businesses thrive, government should play a minimal role in private business matters.
A government is a foundation for a successful nation, and is responsible for maintaining harmony in the country. The claim prompts that governments should not interfere in private business matters of small businesses in order for them to flourish. I strongly disagree with this claim and believe that government is an integral part for helping a small business to grow because of two reasons.
Firstly, Capital and investments are very important aspects of a business. These factors can decide the fate of a business. The government can help small businesses to grow by providing them subsidies and tax rebates. For instance, consider a country where the government levies high taxes on procurement raw materials and doesn't offer any subsidies to small businesses. The businesses are bound to fail because of the high investment costs and low profits. they cannot compete with 'Multi national Companies' that give the same goods at low prices. Now, consider a government that invests a huge amount on its small businesses and promotes start-ups by creating incubators. For example, the 'Make in india' movement started by the indian government promotes small businesses and development of goods inside the country, instead of importing the goods, thereby, promoting startups. The businesses are more likely to flourish in this country as they have the government support.
Finally, governments can help in keeping a check on whether a business is following the right rules and is not involved in any malpractices like venality, or any other felony. For instance, the demonetization in india by the government helped in flushing out a majority of 'Black Money' from the indian market and was a hinderance for the businesses that were involved in malpractices. this helped in keeping a check on the businesses, promote good business practices, and support businesses by creating an honest environment.
governments and the reforms laid by them are imperative for the growth of small businesses. Without the government, the businesses would work in a haphazard manner which would eventually harm the growth of the nation and it's businesses in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e government, the businesses would work in a haphazard manner which would eventually harm the growth ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 2235.4752809 81% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28779069767 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97075245224 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511627906977 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8463028076 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2352941176 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 5.21951772744 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357389681402 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126526156615 0.0831039109588 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990699183179 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234016198409 0.150359130593 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548201758566 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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