TPO 41.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teacher were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they were nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's modern life, thanks to the advanced technologies and breakthroughs in every section of science, the way of life has altered dramatically. Some people are of the opinion that teachers appreciated adequately during our time. While, I personally subscribe to the view that because of the modification on life and also fostering education between various residents teaching is now a job and it does not have credit as the old days. In the following paragraphs my reasons will be elaborated in on more detail.
To begin with, I cannot deny the fact that teaching is one of the hardest jobs in the societies; however, the broad picture of this job is changed these days. generally speaking, educated people were less during the past days, comparing with today's life. To delve more into it, we had a proverb that says ' teaching is job of prophets in the society'. it indicates that past days, how they reacted to the teachers and process of education. For example, in the past the knowledge was not spread and scatter throughout the world. In hence, a person could be experts on a variety of majors such as astronomy, medicine, psychology, mathematic, to name but a handful. this example illustrated the education situation on the past time, which was rare and scarce on that time; therefore, teachers were elites and adept on those societies. The more they were elites; the more the society appreciated and valued them.
Another reason why I agree with this idea is that improving social media, students access to the salient data in the short time. it means that although teachers would do well in their work, they might make a mistake and it is normal in every job. Whereas, on the past time students could not find their faults simply; nowadays, they can fide the mistakes and errors quickly, and as far as I am concerned for youth it would be harder to take the teacher who makes mistakes appreciated and valued them. For instance, our professor made a mistake on the class and after pasting a year; we mention it with our classmates and somehow make fun of him.
Drawing upon the reasons that I mentioned above, although there are several exceptions excluded from general rule, I believe that teachers are not appreciated as old days. Not only were there different societies on that time, which were not many educated people on there, but also students have altered and act differently than the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2009.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 414.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85265700483 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57633466221 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541062801932 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4060474342 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.611111111 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260448873448 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804468294705 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734778236908 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147741972106 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544095053484 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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