Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Our history means our roots and heritage. There is a recent debate about accepting or refusing teaching history to all university students regardless their field of study. For me, I agree with the opinion supporting making history classes mandatory to all university students and in this essay I will discuss my reasons for that agreement.
First of all, it is important to know our history well because without history we don't have presence. When we read about the history and events happened over the past centuries, we can learn from the mistakes of our ancestors and avoid repeating them. Reading about the periods of decline in the history of civilizations allows us to know their points of weakness to avoid them and points of strengh to emphasize on them. For example, last week I was reading about the ancient pharoahs and what made them strong and smart to build such amazing civilization that made me feel proud of them.
Secondly, we have to be ashamed of ourselves if we do not know the stories in our history or even know the circumstances that pushed the events in a certain sequence. We have to know our history to tell the foreigners about it and to show them to what extent our ancestors were clever. For instance, in the history of my country Egypt, we have to know the reasons why the ancient egyptians built the pyramids and sphinx, so that we can recruit people to come and visit our country to see those wonderful monuments. We need to appreciate our old civilization and be proud of it in front of the world.
Lastly, history is as important as sciences and should take the same level of care. While physics and biology are important for the development of countries, history also participates indirectly in building those countries as well. This is because history is like the first step of the stair that if it's not recognized, the whole stair can't be existed. Knowing the roots of something helps us to develop and change them.
In the summary, it will be amazing if history classes are included in the curriculum of all colleges and universityies. The benefits from doing that extend from learning from the mistakes, passing through the importance of being proud of our ancestors and ending up with enhancement and development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81282051282 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63637753784 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494871794872 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7603203705 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.411764706 100.406767564 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9411764706 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16622694914 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625466112416 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510570098109 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108135125357 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645291423985 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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