2) Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
views differ when it comes to honesty in relationship between people. some people are inclined toward the opininon that any person in his relationship should tell the truth. However, others may takes an opposite viewpoint and believe that it is not obligatory for people to tell the truth in their relationship. In my perspective, there are numerous advantages in telling lie which I will pinpoing my outstanding reasons in the following paragraphs.
The first point worth mentioning is that it is plausible to make our partner upset by telling the truth. Nowadays, many families have a hectice life which forced them to spend most of their time on working and earning money. Because there are extreme competition for jobs many people become fire and their position will fill by other people. A person that losed his job, will hurt his partner by telling the truth. Therefore, it is better for their life if a person do not tell the truth and after finding another job tell that he was fired from his previous work place. Moreover, Telling the truth in a family which has a lot of financial problem will lead to fight between their member. So, truth will damage their relationship and increase their problem which is not healthy for their relationship. For instance, my cousin has difficult situation in their family and since they had alot arguments in their home, he did not tell about the result of university's entrance exam which was really embarassing.
The further more subtle point is that there are plenty opportunities in lying which will make other people happy. It is obvious for every person that honesty is the best policy but by being honest all the time, people miss the chance to surprise other person. For example, my brother did not tell the truth to his wife and arrange a surprise party for her. She was really upset and thought his husband forgot her birthday. When she came to home, all her famlily surprised her and make her verry happy. Hence, sometimes telling lies is essential for people since it provides excellent chances to make other happy.
to make a long story short, based on the aforementioned arguments, since it will harm other people and make opportunities thay will help other people, it is beneficial for all people to tell lie for somtimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, for instance, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84398976982 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50601281095 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501278772379 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5670621457 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6842105263 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239032805107 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900760879088 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697661227208 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165983048769 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935884394707 0.0645574589148 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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