The plans below show a student room for two students and a student room for one student at an Australian university.
The two pictures compare the design and weekly renting cost of a room for one and two students single and twin rooms for students at an Australian university.
Overall, it is clear that the room for two students is larger and equipped with more furniture. Also, the price of a single room is much lower than that of a 2-person room.
At 200 dollars per week, the room for a pupil is 6 meters in length and 2.5 meters in breadth/width. The bathroom is located in the top left corner and opposite the kitchen appliances, which include a microwave, a stove and a sink. There is a study desk situated to the right of the bathroom and a bed in the right corner with a window view. The student can also use the television on the wall opposite the study desk.
Paying 350 dollars per week, students live in a captive/refining space of six by four meters, which is twice as large as the single one. There are one bathroom, one study desk, and one bed arranged similarly to the single room. Besides, there is a new bookshelf added between the bathroom and the study desk. The kitchen area is also rearranged adjacent to the door, giving space for a table, chairs and a television. The other study desk is close to a bed situated in the bottom right corner.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'bathrooms'?
Suggestion: bathrooms
... large as the single one. There are one bathroom, one study desk, and one bed arranged s...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4525862069 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50008546227 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504310344828 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1143524998 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0833333333 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378460177839 0.215688989381 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124658179439 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162326609206 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298220975181 0.15604864568 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.183966722024 0.0819641961636 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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