Most people have forgotten the meaning behind traditional or religious festivals; during festival periods, people nowadays only want to enjoy themselves.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The globe has become a joint home not only for all human beings but also other living beings. Literally, what can work for the sake of people's happiness and welfare is the reason behind what the people want.
Firstly, as the world is now connected more than any time in the history, globalisation has affected all the cultures, beliefs and religious festivals to be only nomadic. The human nature does not accept limitations and creates feeling of binding themselves which opose their freedom and liberty. Therefore, people only want to enjoy themeselves these days.
Secondly, values are changing during a period. A person of 1990 is not a person who lives now in a technologically equipped earth. Technology has removed many separated beliefs and instead, created joint ones. I do not think it was possible for someone who can visit hundreds of kilometers away from their origins and experience another culture, for example, my ancestor was not able to even dream coming to India but, I am sitting for a test here today.
Happiness and enjoying is not confined to any relegion or beliefs. You can find different people with different beliefs and relegions but you cannot find them their happiness different. I want to insist on being only human to create happiness for each other and share the sorrows - these are the joint enjoys amongst all the human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94347826087 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55254188994 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3281247457 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236067689908 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082380199343 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690593813348 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142822180078 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538186194934 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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