Nowadays many people work from home. Some think it is beneficial, while others think it may distract the family routine. What is your opinion?
In moderns days, people struggle to keep perfect work-life balance. Whereas many believe that it is beneficial to work from home, others argue that this program may infiltrate on their personal schedule. I vehemently support the former view for some empirical reasons.
To begin with, those who support the latter view may consider that working from home may result in turbulence between personal and professional time. This is because when people operate from home, being active all the is often required, as their employers may reach out to them anytime for updates and support due to uncertain working hours. For instance, the typical office hours are indeed 9 AM to 6 PM, and employers tend not to expect their employees to work beyond these hours, which is not a case when working from the home. If a person requires to work from home enduringly, it would impact their personal life negatively. Consequently, unnecessary tension and mental disturbance between family members.
On the contrary, I believe that the prime privilege of working from home is that an individual can work at their own pace. Unlike the office, waking up early in the morning generally not mandatory, as a worker can decide their work schedule as per their routine, which further allows them to spend long quality time with their family. The main need is to prepare a decent schedule rather than working randomly whenever required and spend the required time with family, and this also improves their productivity as a result.
In conclusion, although it is daunting for many people to balance their time between family and office when they work from home, which puts them into a family crisis, these concerns can be dealt with by making an appropriate schedule that results in better productivity and more time with loved ones.
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Suggestion: working
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04318936877 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50116031395 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8000748503 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217442377681 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956348517526 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592505174643 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15400290027 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616595464758 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.