A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.
People learn and grow throughout life. The world is changing constantly and we the human adapting the new technologies that every new century needs. Now the world is relying on different tech and the most important one is computer that is used for networking, communication and a list of things that we can’t imagine. If I have to present something for a child evolution then I’ll give him/her a computer. Why is that so? I’ll explain my answer in my essay.
Firstly, in this world of globalization, computers are the main core of every field of life. If the younger ones have this tech then they are able to learn a lot of things like Microsoft word, excel and PowerPoint that will be helpful in their education life as well as their professional life. For instance, they can use internet for making their assignments or collecting data for their research projects and even they can play games for refreshing their minds that can also help to think them logically. Furthermore, for their professional career if they grasp on Microsoft than they have better opportunity to be lead in particular job.
Secondly, they can make foreign friends that are from different nation. From this they get to know a new civilisation for example, their culture, traditions, events and most importantly their language a new way of communication. They can also get familiar from history of other people.
To recapitulate, if we have to give something to a child for their brain blooming than we have to give a thing that’s gave them confidence or opportunity to meet up with world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in particular, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1315.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88847583643 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81446276343 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1739249105 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9285714286 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0732889077267 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0292663325697 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306016942239 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0515980703537 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200511527123 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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