Some people say that it is possible to tell alot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Fashion is more crucial nowadays. Everyone wants to look better and build their own personality. However, can we really judge a person's traits and traditions by his/her clothes. I am not 100% sure about this statement. I will discuss this conundrum in this essay.
Firstly, in this world of globalization and in every cosmopolitan city, T-shirts and pants are popular in every person. If we say this is a trend dressing of every in these days than it's not false obligation. For example, what if different race and colour people is wearing 2 piece suit in a party than how can you identify his ethnicity. People occasionally wear their traditional dresses with the modern touch of their society. In this situation, we cannot tell about one’s cultural personality. Moreover, what if everyone wears a turban or in certain place every women wears a veil than how do you say every women is a Muslim and every turban man is Sikh.
Next, if we want to know a person’s values and character from his/her appearance than this can be a misleading outcome. For instance, if a business man gets dirty his clothes by an accident than we wouldn’t judge him as a poor man. Furthermore, a women coming from a party and wearing miniskirt than you won’t tell that she is a bad women or even worse a prostitute.
In essence, we can’t judge a person's value by his dirty clothes as a poor man or a women as a bad person by his short clothes and we can’t tell about someone tradition by seeing his /her dress because there is a common dressing in the world in recent days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and pants are popular in every person. If we say this is a trend dressing of ever...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...judge him as a poor man. Furthermore, a women coming from a party and wearing miniski...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...t than you won’t tell that she is a bad women or even worse a prostitute. In essence...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a woman' or simply 'women'?
Suggestion: a woman; women
...e by his dirty clothes as a poor man or a women as a bad person by his short clothes an...
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Line 4, column 84, Rule ID: WOMAN_WOMEN[1]
Message: 'woman' is the singular form of 'women'. Consider using 'woman'?
Suggestion: woman
...by his dirty clothes as a poor man or a women as a bad person by his short clothes an...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6164874552 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64344632656 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.649458418 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183166999342 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601340551426 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400796904233 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108976567253 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313922671866 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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