You are experiencing a financial problem and want to ask your landlord if you can pay the rent late Write a letter to your landlord In your letter explain Why you are writing to him Why you cannot pay the rent When willful pay the rent

Essay topics:

You are experiencing a financial problem and want to ask your landlord if you can pay the rent late. Write a letter to your landlord .
In your letter explain:
Why you are writing to him
Why you cannot pay the rent
When willful pay the rent

Dear Mr. Brown,
I hope you and your family are all well. I am writing to postpone my rent payment ; that’s because, I have shortage in money in this days.
The issue is that my son , David, had a car accident last month; while he was crossing the street to reach his school, he had been crushed by a reckless driver in a black Mercedes car. As a result, he had many surgical operations to fix his bones and still present in Intensive Care Unit (ICU)in the American Hospital. The foremost problem i faced, that me and my family don’t have medical insurance yet; so, we pay much money for continuous medical care.
I would appreciate if I can pay my rent at first of December 2020; therefore, there will be enough time to solve my financial issues and correct my situation.
Thank you and please give my best regards to your family.
Yours sincerely,
Jack

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...’s because, I have shortage in money in this days. The issue is that my son , David...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... in this days. The issue is that my son , David, had a car accident last month; w...
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Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...present in Intensive Care Unit ICUin the American Hospital. The foremost problem ...
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Line 3, column 339, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...American Hospital. The foremost problem i faced, that me and my family don’t have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 26.3917525773 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53846153846 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40736066158 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.74358974359 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9089725377 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191336801516 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886980033706 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609322984566 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12910347628 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676102102865 0.0580467560999 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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