the pursuit of profit and economic growth prioritize addressing social and environmental issues
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Most people pursuit of their success and economic development ,on other hand people believes that they should attention on manage social and environmental problems.This essay will discuss both of opinions. It will discuss the process of profit and economic, followed by addressing social and environmental issues.
Mainly, people who pursuit to get the highest value for money, they’re always thinking about pursuit of profit and economic growth. Dominance of pursuit of profit by businessmen is rooted in what motivates the capitalist economic system. For example, you will leave your inheritance to your family to add the conservation of their future. As a result, you will increase the source of income, because wealth is what future generations live for, and you will always be remembered.
Secondly, in the light of people opinion prioritize addressing social and environmental issues. Social is people who lives in the world that they need health environment to live in. Such as, people should fixation how you will work to give the highest benefit for development like recycling materials, because the contraction of trees will decrease the percent of oxygen, and it will cause climate change. Due to this, it won’t lead the next generation to live Safe.
In conclusion, Most people seek economic success and development. In other ways, people opinion that they should be considered with handling social and environmental trouble.
By perception, my opinion is people should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48535564854 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8781956877 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531380753138 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3849343017 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.846153846 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3846153846 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301146926249 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125020794447 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110079223089 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18687663727 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677192605476 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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