Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Suitable environment is an essential need for any creature to live peacefully. If we say that we make our environment and we can ourselves can safe this with different protective methods, then it will not fruitful without intervention of the government and large companies. I would agree to this statement to some extent because it has some reasons.
First of all, modern life preferences are becoming strong with surrounding. People buy those things which fascinate them or they see them on commercials or on the social media. Therefore, authority and big firms should also give the message of the safe environment with their products. In this way, public will have awareness about their surrounding and they will definitely follow the instruction of their favorite product.
On the other side, government should ban those things which are destroying the natural environment and will create severe impact on future generation. For instance, chemical emission by companies and plastic bags usage are continuously creating air and water pollution. These pollutions are causing the different diseases among human and different species of the earth. Government can also charge the fine against them, so that this fine can be used to reinstall the natural environment again.
To sum up the arguments, government and large companies can play main role to protect, safe and improve the environment because they have more excess to large population as compared to individual. Individual can only safe the environment form which one`s is surrounded. One thing that individual can do, is to educate and help the people to improve situation and work in a team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2679245283 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84573341113 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607547169811 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8779487365 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7142857143 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9285714286 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319234970005 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914973540022 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084026155431 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182082635918 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119763861184 0.056905535591 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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