It is inevitable that as technology develops so traditional cultures must be lost. Technology and tradition are incompatible - you cannot have both together.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
some are of the opinion that advent of technology can put an end to cultural values and it is unavoidable to have technology and customs go hand in hand. I partially agree with the statement because advancement in technology has definitely brought changes in the way of living but earlier ways are alive and respect towards it is still intact. This essay will be analysed with supporting examples.
Smartphones and computer systems have certainly taken a higher place in today's era. it is undeniable that scientific developments have surrounded us and mankind's inclination towards the gadgets have been rapidly growing.most of the generation have started to blindly follow the trends proliferating on social media and emulate their idol's lifestyle which sometimes go against the conventional ways. For example, in the past predominantly people in india disdained love marriages and was an unacceptable practice in india but now it is socially accepted.
many of the countries adopt the belief and ideas, which were originated in some other foreigner land but it doesn't supersede the moral and ethics of their country. For instance due to westernization, many of the women as well as men quit the archaic style of dressing up, however, their outer appearance did not alter the fact that ancestral methods are still preserved and not forgotten.
To conclude that though emergence modern science and lifestyle exhibit drastic changes but our customs are not faded away either. Both of these way of living is peacefully implemented without sabotaging the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.284 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88583020984 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3373347588 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.1 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129717724874 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454691651307 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477668653194 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657291969653 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732764719173 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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