In cities, many people are living alone. What are the reasons for it? It is a positive or negative trend?
In this modern age, people are heavily involved in their work-life more than ever. A survey conducted by Time of India reported that the new generation chooses to live away from their family members, hence they travel to urban cities for studies and job opportunities. I believe it to be more of a positive development, but this also has a few negative aspects to it.
Nowadays, young people have developed a mindset to move away from their parents to a different city to get the freedom to live their life, the way they want and hence, they choose to study or find job opportunities away from home. Consequently, this leaves them alone with no one to take care and they often feel lonely. For Instance, children who have strict parents, often tend to apply to overseas institutions for studies in order to get away from their parents. which results in they living in a foreign country and feel homesick.
On the other hand, living alone encourages people to do their household work by themselves which helps a person to become self depended. For example, a person staying alone must do all the household work like cooking, washing dishes, clothes and taking care of his living space. Therefore, making them becomes self depended.
Also, while living alone a person gets his personal space to do things that he likes to do. By doing so, an individual gets to know his or her interest and can pursue it. To explain, If a person likes to do painting, he can pursue it in his free time which, While living with his family his spare time would be used by the family member in other engagements.
To conclude, I believe, Staying alone is a positive trend. Although it has few negative sides to it, this way person sometime may feel homesick or lonely but he can make his own choices and use his freedom the way he wants
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., making them becomes self depended. Also, while living alone a person gets h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6512345679 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44469968427 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6946760963 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.466666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199296796384 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734889231065 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567756190453 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112456134169 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360764108162 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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