In some parts of the world it is becoming popular to research the history of one's
own family. Why might people want to do this? Is it a positive or negative
development?
In several countries, many people are increasingly conducting research regarding
the origins of their own family. There are a number of reasons why this trend
happens, and I believe it is a negative tendency.
To begin with, there are some reasons why individuals are interested in
discovering their family's history. The first clear reason is that these people are
just curious about who their ancestors were and what role they played in society.
For example, it might be interesting to find out that one's great-grandfather was
once a member of the royal family. This kind of information can make people
become proud of their origins. Additionally, many people research about their
family's history as this activity can serve medical purposes. For instance, they
would be aware of any disease that they inherit from their relatives.
However, I would argue that this tendency is negative because of some reasons.
Firstly, as this trend does not bring about significant benefits apart from those
related to health care, it can be considered a waste of time and money, especially
for young individuals. In my opinion, it would better for them to focus their
resources on more important things such as improving their social skills. Secondly,
the information on the history of one's family may have adverse effects on their
attitude in life. To illustrate, a person with a noble origin may become arrogant,
while someone who is a descendant of a criminal might be ashamed and lose his
confidence.
In conclusion, researching one's own origins is becoming more common in
society, and I believe this is a negative development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 35, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...dly, the information on the history of ones family may have adverse effects on thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24060150376 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81677056099 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586466165414 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4465964216 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.5714285714 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4285714286 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38176352705 479% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25296426148 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947329321803 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672294926247 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073691322745 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551482865081 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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