Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
It goes without saying that in this competitive era that we live, education has been being one of the most essential aspects of people's lives. In this regard, while some people believe that today parents are more involved in their children's education that parents were in the past, others hold the opposite view. Personally, I firmly concur with the former group. To substantiate my point of view, two significant reasons are explored in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, these days, parents almost are highly educated, and they can involve in their kid's educations. To clarify, since most of the parents today are familiar with education steps, also, they know of the school course, they can help kids in their homework. However, in the past, many parents had not literacy ability, so they could not involve in their children school work. For example, my father recounts me about his childhood when he was a schoolboy. He had to learn his lessons by himself because his parents had not reading ability. However, now my little brother learned most of his lessons with my mother explanations.
Secondly, today, parents consider children's educations as an advantage proud in front of others. To be specific, in this competitive world, people are searching for anything to exaggerate it and can use the situation to boast in front of their extended family or friends. As a result, if children are successful in their educations, their parents will have an opportunity to be proud of them and can use this chance to boast in their family gathering. Therefore, being successful in school is extremely important for parents of kids.
In conclusion, taking two reasons mentioned above into account, I do believe that parents today are involved more than in the past. This is because not only they have an educational background but also can use educations of their kids as a boast.
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Do you agree or disagree…
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 110, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y can involve in their kids educations. To clarify, since most of the parents toda...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9873015873 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64015544256 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1702165719 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1875 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383349384296 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126902570868 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109417817755 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24335137904 0.150856017488 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043082343109 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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