Topic 1: In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative?
In terms of parental roles changing in our modern societies, we easily identify more dads stay at home and look after their offspring while a profound number of moms has gone out for work. This phenomenon originates from some complex reasons. As a result, the transfermation creates such advantages to the sustainable development.
Human civilizations go hand in hand with women's rights, those have been acceptable and supported. Following this, women have as equal opportunities as men to empower their potentials. Needless to say, men gradually have made sense of respection their partners as well as be more open-minded about what is exchanging. They let their wives go out and earn for living, including allowing themselves stay at home and assist household chorces. Without doubt to observe that women tend to expand their limitations into the digital community so that the women labor- rates then raise vividly.
As some features above, we turn out a diversity of benefits we obtain from the new tendency. First, women are allowed to pursue their own careers and goals in life. What we all attempt to implement reaching gender quality as well as shaping women's justice- one of 7 sustainable development goals declared by United Nations. Plus, fulfilling women's rights means building up a concrete family bond, living together in harmony so that children nutured in these home would get well-educated because of good family backgrounds. Even the appearance of them in politics in recent years impacts significantly movements in every nations
Conclusion, "Men make houses, women make home" has no longer been the true wisdom in the state of these days. Otherwise, starting a family had better based on optimistic and sympathy thoughts towards "half or the world".
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... result, the transfermation creates such advantages to the sustainable developmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, then, well, while, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29473684211 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85665325797 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.691228070175 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.149085984 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.785714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0788322091894 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205766671336 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273040415868 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0442719231977 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207995432587 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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