It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos …) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?
The extinction of animal species is considered as a precedent process of nature. It is unnecessary for people to make a bid of suspending this process. The essay disagrees with this idea and will point out that the interference of humanity is crucial to maintain our planet’s biodiversity.
First of all, wild animals play an indispensable role in the ecosystem. Should they vanish, the balance of food chain shall be broken, leading to the evaporation of not only fauna but also human beings. For example, due to deforestation and climate change, the population of Indian tigers fell dramatically in 1999, which makes the number of deer increase uncontrollably. These harmful animals invaded nearby villagers’ fields and began to destroy crops, putting persons under threat of famine.
Second, both people’s agricultural and industrial activities are the main reasons make numerous animals be on the verge of extinction. Thus, it is our responsibility to save and conserve them as a way to compensate Mother Nature. It is urgent for us to treat animals with respect and protect them from being disappeared permanently. By the way of illustration, the authority of China has applied drastic policies and laws in order to grapple with illegal poaching. As a result, the population of pandas rose gradually, guaranteeing the existence of China’s symbolic animals.
In conclusion, people ought to try to save as many animals as possible from the risk of being extinct. If we do so, the opportunity for us to maintain the natural ecosystem and protect the Earth’s biodiversity will be more promising and realistic.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25287356322 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09469936565 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4447190321 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.9285714286 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6428571429 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223726878279 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717740423231 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672998154712 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135082892299 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679172658879 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.