Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically.
Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
Undoubtedly,there is an escalation in trend of procuring the imported foods but a major portion of the populace
vocalize that indigenious eatable are more eco-friendly and cost effective. Even though the acme quality of nutritions
are not available in local foods, still the assets associated with consuming the local food outscores the prejudices as locally
produced eatables are less costly and envionemental friendly.
By ill luck, the lack of nutritional content and excessive usage of pesticides turn the local food less favourable among
denizens.Seemingly, the supremacy of developing worlds do not devote the adequate chunk of their budget towards regulation of
quality food and development of agriculture practices. Also,it is biased to over look the fact published by WHO that the
import of genetically modified fruits such as Golden Kiwi has been surged due to its high nutritional value which could curb several
chronic ailments. Therefore, the spurt in the demand of imported food is burgeoning owing to their inevitable advantages.
The intensify economic cost and high amount of carbon footprints due to the delivery of foreign foods through
planes and ships would make it into a irrational decision.Consequently, the locally grown food do not contaminate
the environment as the foreign food and it quite more cost efficient .To exemplify, as per the report published in the gone
calendar year by 'The New York Times',one of the pivotal reasons for the spurt in the carbon emission was trading of foreign
foods.Hence, the indigenous food save the colossal amount of money as foreign foods are so costly and pathetically hit the ecological
cycle.
In conclusion,although the ingredients of foreign food are exceptionally good, the merits of local food in term of eco-friendly and
affordability overshadow the boons of imported foods.
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also, but, consequently, hence, if, look, so, still, therefore, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52595155709 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3232119257 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.2975951904 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.798063295 49.4020404114 317% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 228.142857143 106.682146367 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.2857142857 20.7667163134 199% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4285714286 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
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Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977651940722 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392544442674 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700477094892 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514935992382 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.3 13.0946893788 193% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.4 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.78957915832 225% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.1190380762 182% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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