You recently moved house and you used a removal company to help you move your belongings. However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to
the manager of the removal company. In your letter .
• Give details of the move
• Describe the damage •
.Say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir,
My name is Samvedna Puri and i am feeling disappoainted while inscribing this epistle. The purpose of letter is to notify you regarding the loss which was occured to my expensive valuables during transit inflicted by the staff of your corporation. It mainly consisted antique furniture and some of the electronics appliances.
Even though, the prime moto of your concern is to provide ace quality services but disheartedly i have to admit that such kind of service was never experienced by me so far. Beside the fact that delivery was in scheduled time, i was stunned after receiving the things which was in unacceptable position.The one of the legs of dinning table was broken and the HD screen of LG television was cracked.
As far as amount of loss is concerned, i adamantly anticipate the compensation for the damages or placement for the commodities as soon as possible. Otherwise, this situation will certainly force me to lodge complaint against your company which i do not aspire to happen.
Hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
Your Sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Samvedna Puri and i am feelin...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r Sir, My name is Samvedna Puri and i am feeling disappoainted while inscribi...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... mainly consisted antique furniture and some of the electronics appliances. Even though,...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ct that delivery was in scheduled time, i was stunned after receiving the things ...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ings which was in unacceptable position.The one of the legs of dinning table was br...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ge complaint against your company which i do not aspire to happen. Hope to hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03825136612 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93035812078 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.8757973735 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.444444444 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134174279088 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576794758619 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442892670345 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759467610075 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028128694653 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 8.71597938144 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.