The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one.
The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something
that continues throughout life.
Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and with relevant evidence
Undoubtedly rely on single career option is become the term of bygone era, thus individuals are looking for multiple career opportunities and inclined towards the further education. I cogitate that choosing more than one career always conductive in saving the people from unemployment and endows the guarantee of financial security throughout the whole life.
Since nothing in this fast paced world is permanent, thus researching for other alternative is justifiable. Seemingly, the ever growing technology is altering the traditional methodology of working and obsoleting some career practices. Consequently,sticking with one career would be insane for humans. Also it is biased to over look the fact published by Canadian Revenue Agency that lack of security in the job market has forced most of Canadian to obtain multi licenses. Therefore, opting more than one career
ensures the sense of security among denizens.
To continue, several career alternatives intensify the wealth of people and assure ample revenue. Dynamic economic conditions and prevailing turmoil in the politics always give the birth to numerous threats to prevailing business ventures. Thus, dependence on multiple careers is preferable in order to say good bye to financial woes. To exemplify , as per the advice of one of the richest business tycoon named ' Warren Buffet' people should not put their all eggs in the one basket. Hence, instead of focusing
on career, humans should work on other available opportunities.
In conclusion, although single career turns the individuals to exceptionally competent, instability in market and burgeoning financial obligation motivate the people to figure out more career choices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as for, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64591439689 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03834685141 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649805447471 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8687721678 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.615384615 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168827187912 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597663960608 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436226228354 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788452664714 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467992222851 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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