Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is undeniable that education plays a vital role in ensuring the prosperity of a nation. Some people embrace the opinion that merely the education system can lead a country to success and I totally agree with this statement. This essay is to elaborate on what extraordinary things that education has brought to humans and propelled a country toward economic and social progression.
To begin with, it is acknowledged that education is the ideal key that helps people to achieve breakthroughs. Thanks to studying at schools or by themselves, people can enrich their knowledge, discover and perceive advances in science and technology all over the world and then apply such attainments into their work as well come into with new initiatives or inventions. For instance, in developing countries where agriculture with manual labor dominates mainly the economy so only by education, citizens can contribute to the national industrialization and modernization. Practically, Governments in most powerful countries in the world, such as the United States or Japan, take great consideration in the national education system.
Secondly, a proper education system increasingly and promotes traditional moral values that contribute to the stable development of society. To be more specific, being well educated, people form good dignity at an early age which is the most significant element creating success for each individual. Moreover, it is believed that the better the national education system is, the lower the crime rate is because people have been originally trained to be exemplary citizens. Last but not least, educated people also tend to be healthier as they know what is good and bad for their health. Therefore, they have more time and energy to work and create values for society.
In conclusion, although there may be several factors that affect a country’s well-being, in my opinion, the education system is still the cornerstone of economic and social progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40192926045 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04150491754 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607717041801 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.990994745 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.230769231 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25479275388 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896953663382 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057122377296 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153372844455 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417679026568 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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