In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this case?
What can be done about this problem?
According to statistics, nowadays about 7.5 billion humans live in the world. Some people argue that although, agriculture have been developed, many people fight with starving. In my opinion the cause of this problem is density of people and infrastructure. The solution can be increasing harvest rate and building farmlands near to the cities.
Regarding to density of some counties such as Chine or India, population of this king of countries need a great number of food supply. The more people the more demand to nutritious. In this case I think famer should increase the volume of harvest. Furthermore, they might offer the diverse type of grocery foods to residents. Also, an increase in amount of harvest can improve capability of government to export them. The income can be spend in to agriculture kin order to next development.
Moreover, the second significant reason in deficit of food is transport infrastructure. While nourishments travel from farmland to stores, the food mile influences in cost, also quality of food, simultaneously, making food costly. In that case, government should be agree in constructing layouts of farmland near to the cities. While the distance between supplier and receiver close to each other it reduces price of food, and even poor people can afford themselves to buy them. Also, if delivers use hybrid cars, this not only save spending to transportation, but also makes positive effect in environment.
To sum up, while world suffer from starving, I think the cause in this situation is transport system and density of inhabitants. The solution can be an increase in yield and a relocation farmlands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the; an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12145748988 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92001364718 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574898785425 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2017669748 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0625 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8125 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170603262056 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521948310036 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507232124768 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115701217543 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799943182125 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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