Business whether big or small is to maximize profit. Do you agree with that? Give your opinion
Recently, the phenomenon of maximizing profit in a big or small company and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of earning a top position in a competitive market is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that making a fulfilling life can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From an individual standpoint, gaining maximum income especially in a small business can provide its owner with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of boosting up sales, as well as reducing costs, are inextricably bound up. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both gaining higher step and being rich and famous apparently can be seen.
on the other hand, some opponents and I disagree with this theory that an integral part of the corporation is to earning money. I think developing a pleasant workplace might increase the consequences of satisfied employees. Moreover, the fundamental aspects of customer loyalty could relate to this reality that the merits of high-quality services pertain to creating a unique name. As a tangible example, according to scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university, Facebook with donating more than 70% of its revenue to its staff and poor people It created a special place for itself among competitors. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of humanity as a principle.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that collecting an enormous amount of money in different companies it is not the main goal. Not only do the advantages of increasing team spirit prove the significance of customer priority, but also pinpoint meaningful lifestyle implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ich and famous apparently can be seen. on the other hand, some opponents and I di...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 297.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3063973064 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11652130632 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 139.433497537 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6632996633 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6150761343 50.4703680194 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.333333333 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.25397266985 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100266136009 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03056062131 0.0925447433944 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520655059337 0.071462118173 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0518649896133 0.151781067708 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251303347644 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.5310837438 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.32886699507 124% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 55.0591133005 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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