You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about some expensive purchases listed in my credit card statement which are not made by me. I am one of your clients since the last few years.
I have made last transaction on February 26th at Subway for $10. On the next day, I noticed that two transactions made at five star hotel and Square One Mall about the same time.I cannot be present at two different places on the same time and even it is not possible practically. I think might be it happened because of glitch in the application or there was technical error while generating the monthly statement.
I want you to resolve it as soon as possible. Although, I have experienced the same situation in the last year and it was rectified in no time.Please provide me best phone number to contact you or assign me your associate who can call me to tackle it.I will provide the proof of my bills. Also, I would like to request you to resend me the statement for this month to avoid further confusion on the bill payment.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours faithfully,
Susan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r clients since the last few years. I have made last transaction on February ...
^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hotel' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hotels'.
Suggestion: hotels
...that two transactions made at five star hotel and Square One Mall about the same time...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...and Square One Mall about the same time.I cannot be present at two different plac...
^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e generating the monthly statement. I want you to resolve it as soon as possi...
^
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...st year and it was rectified in no time.Please provide me best phone number to contact...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... associate who can call me to tackle it.I will provide the proof of my bills. Als...
^
Line 9, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...e bill payment. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours faithfully, Susan
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 898.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51256281407 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54392487087 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658291457286 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3373347588 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216642175419 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868198853037 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627107615882 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136295536572 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058479364199 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.