The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012
The line graph illustrates the proportion of Australian exports to different nations between 1990 and 2012.
Overall, while the percentage of exports to Japan and the US considerably decreased in the 1990-2012 period, the figure of China and India had increasing trends. Besides, it is clear that China significantly contributed to Australian exports in 2012 although the country started from an insignificant figure.
At the starting point in 1990, the figure of Japan was roughly 27%, which was higher than that of the US, at only nearly 12%. After decreases in 1995, the percentage of Australian exports to Japan dropped to approximately 19% in 2012, compared to 7% of the US, a significant difference by 12%.
In contrast, although merely 3% of exporting value of Australia came from China in 1990, the figure of this country suddenly had a sharp increasing trend to precisely 30% in 2012, which was higher than that of the US at the same year. Likewise, the figure of India also had a slight growth from nearly 1% at the starting point to 6% in 2012.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, likewise, so, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89444444444 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81558164506 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522222222222 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2132334602 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34859737399 0.215688989381 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180487165085 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868571271507 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241268146806 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768437799511 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.