Psychological causes of internet addiction
In the modern civilization, the advent of technology has brought to some of debated matters on human lives. Internet addiction, specifically is assumed that it brings in multiple detrimental downsides with most teens and adolescents. As this universal phenomenon is relatively dominant, it is undoubted that social scientists are learning more about its psychological causes. They have found internet addiction can lead to both social and physical effects.
Anxiety and depression, initially turn out to be one of the fundamental causes which makes the rate of internet addictions increasingly. In a specific circumstance, people who suffer from those emotional symptoms can have the predisposition to manifest as an avid internet user. Thus, in the long term, they tend to gradually depend on using internet such social media but this impacts on the mind and makes their anxiety and depression worst.
More broadly, today teenagers are overly shy since influencing from low self-esteem, having feelings of inadequacy and a fear of disapproval from environmental effects. This could be proved by the different gender or social status in which bring in feelings of inferiority or not to be self-confident. Hence, they use internet in order to access social media as a tool to protect and expose themselves in an unrealistic world.
Notwithstanding, every cause is considerably relative to its consequence. Internet addiction at least in some cases can stem from anxiety, depression and shyness. Therefore, these result in two chief factors, both are socially and physically.
The first outcome of internet addiction is on social platform. Overuse internet would probably make youngsters unable to communicate well with others surrounding. For instance, because of the widespread access of internet, people prefer texting messages in lieu of chatting or face-to-face conversations in daily routines. As a result, these tendencies inevitable alter mankind’s way of interaction then would break up social relationship.
Physical effect, besides, would not be underestimated. Brain’s function is reduced generally and physical health will be devastated by using technological devices for a long time. However, teenagers become more isolated when spending almost time for internet applications without connecting with people outdoor. This also offers solitary lifestyle to younger generation these days.
In conclusion, although these adverse effects could originate from psychological causes of internet addiction, if people are more aware of and persistently investigate methods of diminishing the rate of internet users, the world will be practical and livable.
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Your essay explores the…
Your essay explores the significant impact of internet addiction on individuals, highlighting psychological causes like anxiety and depression and their social and physical consequences. It effectively underscores the need for awareness and proactive measures to mitigate these effects in today's digital age.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71105527638 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18728174628 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605527638191 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 718.2 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7263719421 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.318181818 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0909090909 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.59090909091 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309316058674 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817324653374 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871314188571 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151359581566 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077825307224 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.54 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 142.0 78.4519038076 181% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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